VIP ad
Just a quick ad for VIP usinig the Sprint identity
posted by de'artist @ 12:34 PM
2 comments
Critique it!
Each day I will post my design work for the day. YOUR JOB: Critique it! The object of this blog is for me to improve my body of work via feedback that I get from your critiques. Therefore, I request that you only leave feedback that has constructive criticism in it. Leaving posts that say "great job" and the like, serves no purpose other than to boost my ego.
Tuesday, February 21, 2006
About Me
- Name: de'artist
- Location: Maryland, United States
I am working as an art director for a small Ad/Marketing agency. Only problem is that I am the only artist currently on staff. Therefore, I dont have co-workers to feed off of. My hopes are that this site can act as a substitute for that, and improve my design skills.
2 Comments:
Is this already done and printed or can you still tweak?
The ad seems like it needs to pop a bit more..(are you still sick; it's not your usual blow-us-away-graphics..)
Can you try changing the color of 'We will fix all phones for free" to red? That way it grabs your eye and ends up balancing the whole ad by picking up on the red of the girl's shirt on the phone screen.
Sorry too late, its already gone to the newspaper.
I cant use red. Only yellow, black, and grey - those are the sprint colors
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