Critique it!
Each day I will post my design work for the day. YOUR JOB: Critique it! The object of this blog is for me to improve my body of work via feedback that I get from your critiques. Therefore, I request that you only leave feedback that has constructive criticism in it. Leaving posts that say "great job" and the like, serves no purpose other than to boost my ego.
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I feel like most of it is nicely organized in some sort of invisible grid, until I get to the advanced tickets paragraph. I think it may just be too closely aligned with the square where it says "blue fringe" and the ending of each line is very random. I feel like I needs to have the same "trimness" (yeah, I can make up new words) as the rest of the poster.
It may also be nice if you picked up another color from the image, and brought it out somewhere else, in the text, maybe.
homework offer, still available, any time, really... :-D
so..was it a sold out gig??
Sara Mirel - yeah that part was a last minute add on, and they kept changing it, so yeah it is kind of stuck in there. As far as the color goes - once again my fear of color
flor - I have no clue. ( Do you like the photo? I took it)
it looks 70's..did you mute colors?
no, he muted the band. kidding...
(huu is that you??)
Artist boy - where do you get your inspiration from? Does it just fall onto your screen, you wake up with fully-formed ideas or..?
I daven every day that I dont eventually run out them :)
it's mamash a nes! Like a wellspring..I dried up a while back so I'm just impressed taht the ideas are all so different yet still work very well.
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